Fifteen years ago my grandma gave me a golden ring. The ring is very beautiful and special to me, inspite of the fact that now it is not in the right size, and the ring is deep in my Dresser. This ring means a lot to me, it reminds me of my grandma.
The ring was given to me as a gift for my first birthday. It's made of solid gold and has the shape of a circle.That ring was very expensive but my grandmother wanted a respectable gift for my birthday and it mean a lot to me that she bought that ring.
This object is very important to me because it was bought by my grandmother, and symbolizes our love for each other. When I received the ring I was very small but now I understand its meaning.
I chose this ring because it was given to me by my dear grandmother. I hope it will be mine forever and I'll give it to my children when I am older as an inheritance.
This is much better. Good work.
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Daphna