Camp Gal

45 Sher Street

California, Los Angeles

May 5, 2011

Mr. Amit Yarden

Manager

Camp Gal

5225 Doit street

Miami, Florida 4568

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Dear Mr. Yarden

I am writing in response to your add, which was advertised in CA Magazine. I would like to apply for the summer-camp counselor position. I am 27, and currently living in California. I have a degree in social studies. In the past I was a counselor in a youth movement, guiding a group of kids.

Also, I worked as a teacher in High-school for a while. As I grew up, I realized how much I love to be with little kids and how much I love making them laugh. I have two young brothers and two sisters, so I know how to deal with kids and make them listen. I hope you will consider me for the job.

Sincerely yours,

Dana Levi

Very good work, although a bit late.

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Daphna

Paradise Hotel Head Offices

87Gal Street

Tel-aviv, Israel

May 4, 2011

Mr. Steve Avila

Paradise Hotel Head Offices

2240 Correa Road

Waikiki, Hawaii 96822

Dear Mr. Avila,

I would like to know more about the job of sports photographer, which was advertised in the newspaper.

I am interested in learning more about the position offered in the add. I was wondering if you provide a place to stay while working in the job, because I'm have far away. Also, I wanted to know what the working hours are and what the salary is. I have a first degree in photography, and I wish to know the experience needed for the job.

Also, I am a big sports lover myself, so I was wondering if I could get a chance to do water sports myself. Moreover, I would like to know how long is the photographer needed in the hotel.

I would be grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.

Sincerely yours,

Dana Levi.

Much better. Well done.

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